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When Vernon Didn't Miss
(#) red_jacobson 2008-05-17
interesting end to Moldie-Shorts; and I'm wondering where you go from here.
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(#) morriganscrow 2008-05-17
And thus, not with a bang but a whimper, Tommy-boy kicks the bucket.
I do like the mixed muggle/magical cure for Hermione, and am now most keen to read more.When Vernon Didn't Miss
(#) Wolfric 2008-05-17
Good Chapter. I am surprized the brotherhood would hesitate to kill either of the Malfoys. They certainly have demonstrated no redeeming characteristics. It is interesting that a horcrux could be created at birth. Thanks for writing. W.Author's response
Not that it really matters, but it's conception not birth that they hope to useWhen Vernon Didn't Miss
(#) Wonderbee31 2008-05-17
Interesting part, and Tommy went out without even the sound and fury he hoped for it seems, just a raving idiot, who didn't know when to keep his mouth shut. Looking forward to what happens next with Harry and Hermione, and the final outcome of things with all the Light and Dark wizards.When Vernon Didn't Miss
(#) Cateagle 2008-05-17
snicker Not quite what nad who you expected, eh, Tommy-boy? I did like the end of Voldemort but I'm not convinced that they're out of the woods yet with regard to erstwhile enemies. I do like the proposed way of creating a horcrux by a birth. It was interesting to watch Pansy's reaction as the true nature of her situation was spelled out to her and Harry gave her one, and only one, mitigating option. I rather suspect it's going to be an "interesting" time for all concerned. It may also be the only child Pansy ever has, depending on the magical stresses involved; certainly that would be very poetic justice.When Vernon Didn't Miss
(#) Aelfwine 2008-05-17
Nicely done.
The end of Voldemort was... surprisingly anticlimactic, but exactly what he had coming.
I'm looking forward to finding out what happens next.When Vernon Didn't Miss
(#) xhale 2008-05-17
See, now I'm starting to worry. It appears we're at the end of the story. Hermione's about to (hopefully) cured, the horcrux situations are being sorted out, Voldie's become one with the Farce, and everything is basically coming to a resolution.
So why does it feel like we've really just come to the BEGINNING of the story? Ostensibly we're going to be left with H/HR as immortals (and Luna in this chapter almost seemed like a part of that), they have an amazing support system of the oldest and most educated minds on the planet.... and what? They're just going to pop out a couple sprogs and rest in peace for the rest of their immortal lives?
That's where the problem comes in - I'm already so interesting in where you COULD take this iteration of the characters that what has already happened in this story feels like merely a prologue.
We're approaching the death of this story, and I damn well want an account of their next great adventure!When Vernon Didn't Miss
(#) banner 2008-05-18
I'd be interested in exactly how many DE and pureblood sympathizers got killed...When Vernon Didn't Miss
(#) Clell65619 2008-05-18
- Loved it Doc. I bet Tommy we himself when confronted by those beings of real power.When Vernon Didn't Miss
(#) Meteoricshipyards 2008-05-19
Well, in the end its almost a let down when Voldie bites it. I thought it was funny as the other immortals seemed to be signalling Harry and it took a few clues for him to get it.
What about Dumbles? Is he going to pull Harry aside and try to convince him that he should let Hermione die and just be a good gryffindor and not hang out with these strange wizards?
Thans for the story.
Tom A.
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