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Soul Purpose
(#) mikeedvd03 2008-05-24
i don't think that's a filler chapter.duh cause it involves brian knowing their little secret and the bandmates knowing it too.
so keep on writing and i agree with the short chapter thing.but i still love the story.
Author's response
Thank you =) I don't think short chapters are bad or anything but I guess I just felt a bit weird, having written something shorter than I had for a long time...Soul Purpose
(#) nabilah 2008-05-25
Oooh, awesome chapter! As usual, because you're brilliant. xD
You got me scared a little at the A/N, when you said "it had to end here" or something - I thought you were saying you're giving up on the story and I was about to proceed with the depression phase. xD But YAY you're not.
Don't feel bad about this chapter, I love it, and it's not just a filler.Author's response
Eheheee, thanks!! No, you're brilliant :D
I'm sorry I scared you unintentionally, but I guess you can feel safe, I'm not gonna ditch the story. I hate not-continued stories with a passion. I mean I don't hate them because I usually love them and want them to resolve in a nice little ending but when they don't, I get all MAD! So, yeah, even if I lose my interest in the story, I'll try really hard to write for the sake of you guys =)
Thank you again...Soul Purpose
(#) moonpig 2008-05-25
I agree with the reviews above, this is no simple filler chapter. You write so well and it's the way you pick up the simple things - like Gee chewing his nails because he's nervous and then being a bit pissy with Brian. I love it. Big cheers to youAuthor's response
=D I'm all grinny right now! Thank you, it's no filler chapter if you guys say so :) And I like throwing in some random everyday stuff, it makes it more interesting and a bit more realistic, I guess.Soul Purpose
(#) crystalcrash 2008-05-25
Great chapter!
First of all, no i don't think their relationship is any danger at all. People will talk shit because its what they do best, but i know nothing they could say could ruin their relationship. They just have to learn to ignore it all. Gee is used to it, but it'll probably be harder on Defne since she's not used to being hugely famous like MCR.
Mikey and Frank throwing rice krispies made me roll on the floor laughing. Those little touches of humor make me love the story even more.
The chapter was short but that doesn't make it any worse or better. Its just... shorter. Cute just the same ;)
Write more and I'll feed you cookies until you explode. Now doesn't that sound nice? hahah xD
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Hee, thankiesss!
Glad you think they'll survive. We'll see...
Actually, when the idea of rice krispies appeared to me, I laughed a lot, too and I just had to write it!! It's such an unbelieavably cute and childish thing to do and it's really fun imagining them doing that xD
Thanks again. And I'll try to write more, I may or may not be able to update this weekend. I've got nasty finals coming next week. But what's wonderful is that first year of university will be over after that, haha!! Ahh, I'd kill to have those cookies right now, especially if they're chocolate-chipped! I'm gonna go raid the cupboards for something to stuff my face with, now xD
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(#) linerlover 2008-05-26
im worried about them, but i know theyre gonna make it. and if they dont... shakes fist
anywho. great chappie, as per. more soon?Author's response
Ooo, fist-shaking, yet again! But I've got pretty nifty ninja moves, too, you know? xD
Hehe, kidding... Thanks a lot! Keep your hopes up for more soon =)
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