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Chapter 10
25 reviewsShe was lonely, about to be forced to marry the one who didn't love her, but wanted her for her title. She saw him, and knew then..he was her mate.
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The Vampires Mate
(#) pelican_dance 2008-05-26
This is such an awesome story, I love it so much.
Your an awesome writer, this chapter was amazing, the sequence of events and the short dialogue at the beginning was really suspenseful.
Please update soon.The Vampires Mate
(#) disturbedangel6 2008-05-26
omg omg omg!!
i love so much!
plz update sooon!
i actually thought that she was going to get raped.
xxThe Vampires Mate
(#) never0kay 2008-05-27
Yeah, it was amazing...and you end each chapter perfectly. You were right, this was dark. Even if it was just the beginning of the darkness. It's just too dark for me. It's against my capacity to read one like this. But that was great. You should turn this into a movie more than a story. It would be awesome. But a story is already enough.
I liked it.
Carry On.The Vampires Mate
(#) stupid-little-lamb 2008-06-07
GO FRANKIE!!! WOOT!
Grrr... DIE MERRICK, DIEEEEEEEEE!!!
-gives anal with machine bazooka gun and makes sure it goes off-
Stupid Merrick.. Must think yeh a cunny funt, eh Merrick? DIE!
Poor Vesper..
More when you can.
Stefi
xxThe Vampires Mate
(#) cutegirl12356 2008-08-27
I love it....i know i haven't been reading this story alot lately....but i loved it....i just caught myself back up....Please write more soon!The Vampires Mate
(#) prettyodd 2008-09-29
i dont kno wher 2 begin wen im reveiwing this story.....well.....1 U R THE BEST WRITER I HAS EVR READ FROM!!!!!!!....2 plz update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! …3 GO FRANKIE KILL DA BASTARD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!…4 during this entire story ive literally been tearing up and crying cuz its so sweet or i just really want vesper (really original name btw) 2 stop beein scared about sumthin and no other story has EVR made me cry......uhhhh.....i think im on 5 now.....yea 5 I FUKING LUV IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! u made me stay up till 1:03 in the morning 2 finish this story......cant wait 4 mour and .....i think im really addicted 2 this story lol
luvz cassidy..... :**]The Vampires Mate
(#) prettyodd 2008-09-29
i dont kno wher 2 begin wen im reveiwing this story.....well.....1 U R THE BEST WRITER I HAS EVR READ FROM!!!!!!!....2 plz update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! …3 GO FRANKIE KILL DA BASTARD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!…4 during this entire story ive literally been tearing up and crying cuz its so sweet or i just really want vesper (really original name btw) 2 stop beein scared about sumthin and no other story has EVR made me cry......uhhhh.....i think im on 5 now.....yea 5 I FUKING LUV IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! u made me stay up till 1:03 in the morning 2 finish this story......cant wait 4 mour and .....i think im really addicted 2 this story lol
luvz cassidy..... :**]
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