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Slayer Story
(#) Strawberrykitsune 2008-06-16
w00t! everyone loves little creatures with purple teeth!!!
nice job on this chapter, i like it!Slayer Story
(#) XxIceCreamHeadachexX 2008-06-20
I like your descriptions.
They are very, well, descriptive. ;]
I loved this chapter. :]
Update soon!
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(#) okokoiz2kool 2009-01-05
It's definitely interesting, but again, I think you could have explored the plot a little more. The details of the room were nice, as very few people like to talk about anything other than what's going on.
Still, the introduction of "the creature" was a little sudden and confusing. It was also very abrupt and seemed to end too quickly and peacefully, if she is indeed a slayer.
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