Vignette...Gerard's getting clean and sober. Mikey's POV.
Touching at the end. Good start. And your very rich in your own vocabulary to express such detail in one chapter. Well done. XD
(#) Sassy 2008-06-07
I liked this a lot! The description of the withdrawal was very vivid and I found myself wanting to help him too!
aww. very nice.!
it was so descriptive and beautiful!
im so glad gerard is sober though....(like in real life)
Loved it. Wish it was longer. :(
Great job; subtly but undoubtedly touching.
you should continue. that would be amazing
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