- I'm from Russia. I like your history "Shades of Gray".
Only small remark Silvia Mikhailov - the female character.
In Russia the woman would have surname - Silvia Mikhailova.
The letter "a" after Mikhailov
Mikhailov - a man's surname.
With impatience I wait for continuation of history.
(#) Cliviussum 2008-10-17After re-reading my review and my comment regarding Dumbledore (Chapter 10), I began to wonder if the fact that Harry 'found' the book might have something to do with Dumbldore's manipulations. In which case the instruction that his friends not contact him might have more relevance. Rather than openly admit to Harry that he was a mage, Dumbledore allows him to discover it himself. Dumbledore then arranges for the least useful of his watchers to be on duty at the relevant times to allow Harry to organise his 'escape'; it would be his way.
Suitably Machiavellian methinks. Vale Clivius
- i haven't read the entire story yet, but i just wanted to make a point, it would be easier for harry to travel to Copenhagen instead of Baltimore, and then to Nuuk, the travel to Copenhagen is only bout 30-45 minutes and then its a four hour flight to Nuuk.
Author's responseTrue, but there isn't a flight from Copenhagen to Nuuk, at least not that I could find. Baltimore-Washington International Airport is one of the few airports that has a flight to Nuuk, hence why it was used. Thanks for reviewing!
(#) quirky_sass 2008-11-19Hands down one of the best HP fics i've read. You've got original plot, character development, action, great grammar and dialogue. It'd be easier to list all that you don't have. Ah, and this is the one bad thing as well. The end. I sincerely don't want it to be finished though because that way...I can read more.
What to do? Well here's hoping you continue in the glorious way that you have been already doing.
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