- Beyond wonderful!!! Grins Want/need more!!! well done on all of these.
Author's responseWoo! I got a review?!
I've spent the last several months pecking at a longer Yuna/Lulu story, and I have this problem. They sit around being extremely kind to each other, and NOTHING WHATSOEVER HAPPENS!
They cuddle, but I can't seem to make them have sex, and the story is very bland.
I've set it aside for now. Sooner or later, hopefully, it will percolate through my unconscious into a real story.
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