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Dirty Lips and Bloody Eyes
(#) BlackAngelChick 2008-06-16
Inspiration has a funny way of occuring, doesn't it.
The imagery in this is great, and the emotions are really deep.Dirty Lips and Bloody Eyes
(#) MarkPoa 2008-06-17
This is a pretty good dark piece. I like the use of the two sentence stanza to break up the pacing. And the repetition of the title phrase was pretty good and haunting.
It feels a bit moralistic with the suicide at the end, but I think you might have been aiming for that.Author's response
thanks!
yeah, i was in a pretty dark mood!
thank you again!Dirty Lips and Bloody Eyes
(#) xx__ilovemikey__xx 2008-11-02
Omg I love this it was amazing my fav was the last line. The way you managed to change the words slightly that really made sense. Xoxo stazzia
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