Just a poem I wrote. I'd appreciate feedback.
I watch your fireflies dance...
"Go slit your wrists, little girl." Feedback hugely appreciated. :)
"Lips open yet without breath, A stunning caricature of death." Feedback hugely appreciated. :)
A short parody of Sexy and I know it. (One verse)
My HOWL poem for English. Formated after HOWL (I can't think of a better title) by Allen Ginsberg
I'm so sick, sick, sick. Sick of it all.
Everything is relative. Especially people. Please let me know what you think! :)
Just a song I REALLY WANT FEEDBACK.