Just a song I REALLY WANT FEEDBACK.
"I refuse to pretend." A (failed) attempt at lyrics. Feedback greatly appreciated. :)
I would be grateful if you could read this. My first ever poem posted here.
A short poem, the moral of which is take no chances and dont be afraid to gamble. A piece of advise I should take. I know it's pretty emo and bad for a first time writing. All I can say is I hope y...
Uh, this is really personal, but read? Or not. Whichever.
Oh what a surprise I'm disappointed again. So stupid to think I could you call a friend.
This was never your choice.
this is just some crap about what i think the world is like
A poem I wrote when I was fourteen years old.
You loved her, you broke her.
Technically this a song, written by my boyfriend he dedicated to me due to our current 'situation' :)
I want to give this to my boyfriend but don't know if i should.
So, I wrote this just now and it's not been edited but just read? please?