- This was a perfectly good story until you had to go ruin it. Is there a reason you have to have Harry's love interests sexually used/abused? Clearly Acts of Betrayal wasn't just a once-off to get that kinda writing out of your system. I'm outta here.
Author's response- Sigh
(#) whatareyouevensaying 2008-06-20Bah stupid cliff hangers. Oh well, means I'll enjoy the next chapter that much more. This one was fantastic, but it was only the middle of a three-part chapter in my mind.
Looking forward to more.
Author's response- The next one gets violent...
- This chapter has annoyed a lot of readers... Some of the same ones who have been wanting some action...
(#) red_jacobson 2008-06-20Damn it Clell! You can't leave it here! I don't care what you do, but make this one the next story you update, please????????? sorry, puppy dog eyes don't work too well in print GRIN
Seriously, looking forward to a massive smackdown of Greengrass and company in the next chapter
Author's response- The next chapter will be violent, yes.
- Really like the story. Didn't like the fact that Daph's gotten taken advantage of but I can see why you did it. If her father put the clause in for Harry it would be very unlikely he would do any different next time....still I wish it could have been avoided, which it couldn't. (shrugs)
Like I said Really like the story hope you keep writing this and others! Oh and Cliffies are EVIL! :)
Author's response- Yeah that was pretty much the point I was trying to make...
- You know ... after thinking about it this was a very good light hearted story yet you go and do this why??? It doesn't add to the story in fact it just harms it. I'm very Disappointed in this chapter it seems you fell way short of the mark that you had set.
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