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Retribution

by Clell65619 63 Reviews

The aftermath of and explanation for the Breakup

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: R - Genres:  - Characters:  - Warnings: [V] [X] [R] [?] - Published: 2008/06/20 - Updated: 2008/06/20 - 5062 words - Complete

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  • Harry Potter and the Marriage Contracts

    (#) Brian64 2008-06-20 03:34:27 PM

    This was a perfectly good story until you had to go ruin it. Is there a reason you have to have Harry's love interests sexually used/abused? Clearly Acts of Betrayal wasn't just a once-off to get that kinda writing out of your system. I'm outta here.

    Author's response

    - Sigh
  • Harry Potter and the Marriage Contracts

    (#) whatareyouevensaying 2008-06-20 03:41:47 PM

    Bah stupid cliff hangers. Oh well, means I'll enjoy the next chapter that much more. This one was fantastic, but it was only the middle of a three-part chapter in my mind.

    Looking forward to more.

    Author's response

    - The next one gets violent...

    - This chapter has annoyed a lot of readers... Some of the same ones who have been wanting some action...
  • Harry Potter and the Marriage Contracts

    (#) xxsapphireravenxx 2008-06-20 03:49:37 PM

    hopefully you update again soon
  • Harry Potter and the Marriage Contracts

    (#) red_jacobson 2008-06-20 03:57:33 PM

    Damn it Clell! You can't leave it here! I don't care what you do, but make this one the next story you update, please????????? sorry, puppy dog eyes don't work too well in print GRIN

    Seriously, looking forward to a massive smackdown of Greengrass and company in the next chapter

    red

    Author's response

    - The next chapter will be violent, yes.
  • Harry Potter and the Marriage Contracts

    (#) someguy773 2008-06-20 04:01:14 PM

    I agree, you didn't need to have Daphne used by the fat slob to make the story work. I'm not leaving, but come on!!! Otherwise, hurry up, can't stand the cliffhanger...
  • Harry Potter and the Marriage Contracts

    (#) NacNud 2008-06-20 04:03:33 PM

    Really like the story. Didn't like the fact that Daph's gotten taken advantage of but I can see why you did it. If her father put the clause in for Harry it would be very unlikely he would do any different next time....still I wish it could have been avoided, which it couldn't. (shrugs)

    Like I said Really like the story hope you keep writing this and others! Oh and Cliffies are EVIL! :)

    Author's response

    - Yeah that was pretty much the point I was trying to make...
  • Harry Potter and the Marriage Contracts

    (#) Thumper 2008-06-20 04:28:15 PM

    NOOOOOO you are a evil evil person with that Cliffhanger ... Having Daph be raped sucked and went way to far ... You need people to die for this Her Father and Count whats his name ... infact war on the entire house.
  • Harry Potter and the Marriage Contracts

    (#) jabarber69 2008-06-20 04:44:11 PM

    Goddamn man that is the fucking worst place I have ever seen anybody stop in a cliffie!
  • Harry Potter and the Marriage Contracts

    (#) Thumper 2008-06-20 04:58:31 PM

    You know ... after thinking about it this was a very good light hearted story yet you go and do this why??? It doesn't add to the story in fact it just harms it. I'm very Disappointed in this chapter it seems you fell way short of the mark that you had set.
  • Harry Potter and the Marriage Contracts

    (#) CurlyHairedGirl 2008-06-20 05:16:53 PM

    Ahhhh! You can't leave it there! What a cliffie!!!

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