It's a Kind of personal story. Read if you want. Oneshot.
(#) -GuessWho- 2009-03-22 10:05:58 AMI think a lot of people, even ones with issues that aren't quite so serious, can relate to this. Heck, even I can. The really dark nights, where you feel like an idiot for thinking something is out there but feeling too afraid to even believe yourself.
I liked this, dark as it was. Not sure about creative criticism. I mean, if you're writing to let out some demons and that kind of thing, the writing will probably be good anyway because you know what's like. And even if it's not the best, it can be pretty therapeutic. But all in all, this was brilliant (:
Author's responseThank you so much for your review! To tell you the truth, I thought that people would think that I was totally crazy...So I was totally relieved when I read your review.
Once again thank you so much for reviewing.
Thank you so much for your review! To tell you the truth, I thought that people would think that I was totally crazy...So I was totally relieved when I read your review.
Once again thank you so much for reviewing.
- I know right! Seriously, I can relate to this on you don't even know how many levels! This was really great and I hope you continue. Sure it was dark; that's it's appeal. I can't think of anything negative to say. This was fabulous! xoxox -Nikki
Author's responseThank you so much! I'm not really sure what I would do if I were to continue, so I'm still deciding if I will or not.
Thanks again for reviewing
(#) IeroMyHeroMCR 2009-03-22 11:15:52 AMLike the other two have said, i think that everyone goes through this (at least i have). It was also dark like they said but i love dark. This is amazing, please continue it!!!!
Author's responseThank you for the review! I'm so happy that all of you have reviewed this, because it really has helped me and I'm glad to know that there are people who can relate. Thanks for reviewing
(#) Cereal_junkie 2009-03-24 01:00:32 PMI agree with the three above that it was good, but I think it's fine as a stand alone story. Don't let that stop you from writing a sequal though if you should desire to do so. ^.^
Author's responseThanks! Yeah I'm not really sure what I'm going to do yet, but thanks for reviewing
(#) lostmyfearoffalling 2009-03-28 11:04:23 AMThis is so awesome-really insightful. I think everyone completely has these kinds of moments. I think it's really important that you've got some way to get it down, because it really is a good way to connect with people; it helps just as much to read it as to write it, I think. Amazing. Keep writing.
Author's responseOhmygod, I love your writing! Anyways thank you for reviewing. Idk what I'm gonna do next, I've been writing stuff but I'm not really sure if it's good enough to post up here. But Idk, I might still post it.
- oh my god that was really... intense...?
It was really really good and the whole experience of that happening would be absolutely terrifying
If that has happened to you then... i dont know what to say... Im sorry
I hope Mikeys bipolar just... i dunno... disappears
Author's responseOkay? Yeah me too. Thanks for reviewing.
(#) disturbedangel6 2009-04-21 06:05:20 PMI think many people here said that they can relate to this, so I'm going to add onto the list
This always happens to me especially when I'm not close to god and stuff
And right now I'm not
I feel like that I don't deserve to be close to god because I'm gay
I feel that I'm doing bad things just as simple as kissing my girlfriend
So I don't bother because I know god won't answer my prayers
I kinda stay away from horror movies also
But then again I still can't sleep at night
This is a great standalone... but it would be cool if it was a sequeal
I'd like to know where that one goes xD
It's so creepy tho, but I love itxx
Author's responseWow, you totally know exactly how I feel. Like no shit. I’m not really like 100% sure that I’m gay, but I don’t know, I’ve been experimenting a little, I guess you could say, and I’m pretty sure that I’m bi. I just feel so bad because god says that it’s wrong, and I don’t know all those years of church-going and being a student in a catholic school have had a big enough effect on me so that now I feel really guilty about it. I always feel soo hypocritical when I ask god for something—cause I feel a little bit like he would probably hate me—that is, even if he exists. Thank you so so much for reviewing. Your review really did mean a lot to me. I’m not really sure if I’ll be writing any sequels or not, but I’m putting some serious consideration into it. Thanks for reviewing.
I've been thinking about writing about trying to figure out if I am straight or bi or gay, but Idk how I would be able to write that for a guy.
(#) littlepunkrocker13 2009-05-05 09:59:46 AMLike many people said, I can totally relate to this. I love the way it was written, and the darkness that it has.
Right now I don't really know if I believe in god, so I've had this kind of moments.
This was an amazing story, I think a sequel would be good, if you want to write it.
Author's responseYeah, I'm thinking of putting up a sequel, but I'm not sure yet. Thank you so much for reviewing
(#) CrimsonFlowers 2010-08-18 10:40:58 AMI'm gonna agree with everyone else, I can definatly relate to this. I don't really beleive in god right now because just so much stuff has happened and none of it was good so I feel like this sometimes.
I really loved this story, I don't have any critism for it, it was really impacting and you should really consider continuing it :]