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• Harry Potter and the Soul Gem of Anubis

  (#) panter85 2010-11-30

  my advice is to post the story on fanfiction.net.
  that site is a lot userfriendly than ficwad.com
  

• Harry Potter and the Soul Gem of Anubis

  (#) panter85 2010-11-30

  my advice would be to post it on fanfiction that site is a lot user friendly to post

• Harry Potter and the Soul Gem of Anubis

  (#) Richardc269 2010-11-30

  Story is "okay". It's average at best right now, but you also need to fix all these grammar mistakes in the story, as well as some other things.

  Author's response

  Hmm, my beta didn't indicate any problems. I'll go through it again for the grammer mistakes. The extra wide spaces between paragraphs I have no idea how to fix at this point.

• Harry Potter and the Soul Gem of Anubis

  (#) ImNotRomeo 2010-11-30

  Those wide spaces are an error in the HTML code that you can't really do anything about at the moment.
  
  As for your fic, it's just as Richard said, mostly average with room for improvement. The errors aren't very large or noticeable, unless you're a grammar nazi, which I am. It's an interesting point to start diverging from canon and I look forward to seeing whether or not you can successfully do it.
  
  I'll write a real review for you in a few chapters after you have a little more to read.

  Author's response

  Thanks for the info. This was originally my NaNo project for the year, but health reasons kept me from getting too far into it. At the moment, I'm working on Chapter 3 and looking over Chapter 2 for errors. Chapter 3 is where the crossovers start.

• Harry Potter and the Soul Gem of Anubis

  (#) Wonderbee31 2010-11-30

  Interesting start, and will look forward to where you go with this, as well as what it might mean when it comes time for the DCAU crossing.

  Author's response

  Thanks, glad you like it. I'm writing the start of the crossover currently.

• Harry Potter and the Soul Gem of Anubis

  (#) Cateagle 2010-12-01

  Well, I've not seem too many stories that diverge at this point and I'll be quite interested in seeing where you take this. As this is the first chapter, I can't say much, but you have avoided the worst of the typos I've seen in other stories.

  Author's response

  Thanks for the review! Yeah, the first chapter always seems to be a bit slow in most fics. As for the typos, I read a lot of fics myself and I've seen all of the homonym and synonym errors I want to. I definitely try to avoid those LOL.

• Harry Potter and the Soul Gem of Anubis

  (#) falseproffitt 2010-12-05

  Hey fuc* what everybody else thinks,
  it is a good story with a solid begining.
  if you keep receiving complaints addvertise for a betta reader to fix grammer placement and soforth
  

  Author's response

  Thanks for the review, fp. Glad you liked it. I've got someone looking over Chapter 2 (well, when she finishes another beta first) lol.

• Harry Potter and the Soul Gem of Anubis

  (#) tricorvus 2010-12-05

  Don't mind what others say. I like it. I am a 46 year old connoseiur of fanfiction, and have written some of my own. It's not that easy to go from a plot bunny to writing it out. And yes I know that I spelled connoseiur wrong. Twice. I don't know how to spell it.

  Author's response

  Thanks for the encouragement! And I don't know how to spell it either LOL.

• Harry Potter and the Soul Gem of Anubis

  (#) jjracer24 2010-12-07

  Good start, looking forward to seeing where you take this.

  Author's response

  Thanks. Second chapter is at the beta while I am stuck on chapter 3.

• Harry Potter and the Soul Gem of Anubis

  (#) jabarber69 2010-12-18

  Hey that was pretty good, although it has taken me awhile before I would read it from the title I gathered (wrongly it turns out) that I figured it was some aritifact from sg1 universe and it was the soul of anubis that was taking him over!!! glad I was wrong on that one....

  Author's response

  Yeah, I should probably edit the summary to specify the crossover, I had forgotten about that.
  
  Glad you enjoyed the story!

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