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Chapter One: The Shininess of Sun

Ice cream promises, guitar-induced dribbling, and menstruating cherry tomatoes. [*RE-WRITTEN* CHAPTER ONE...PLEASE READ AND REVIEW, GUYS? :D]

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Humor,Romance - Characters: Bob Bryar,Frank Iero,Gerard Way,Ray Toro - Published: 2011/05/08 - Updated: 2012/07/27 - 3793 words

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  (#) YouCanRunAwayWithMe 2011-06-23 02:00:23 PM

  ok so basically, this is epic; all the description and stuff. amazing. you are awesome and also on my favourites(:

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  (#) Thank_MCR 2011-08-02 12:40:20 PM

  I love it. Its really cute and made me squeee and laugh at the end. My dog is looking at me like I'm a maniac...

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  (#) scarlett_fitch2027 2011-09-27 10:42:54 PM

  WHY haven't I read this before? Fucken awesome from the first chapter!! Bob is so cool.
  
  SF xx

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  (#) SummerShock 2012-02-14 02:21:35 PM

  Oh my dear, that was amazing :) I am so glad I have finally found a talented writer :)

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  (#) JTlovesgee_frankie 2012-04-02 11:06:36 PM

  omg i love this :D my friend chrissy is just like gerard in this story today she managed to fall over nothing it was soo funny by the way you should write another story like this

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  (#) KilljoyKid 2012-05-26 12:39:09 PM

  O_O We get three months of Summer holidays... Poor Gee only gets six? P.s, I must admit I haven't read ANY of this fic yet, I just wanted to say SIX WEEKS? hehe I will read it though and give you a proper review!

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  (#) CatscanFlyy 2012-07-26 10:41:47 AM

  It's so weird seeing all the old usernames from when this started so long ago. I like it a lot, like a lot a lot oh Gee and Frank

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  (#) Echelonfrommars 2012-07-27 05:52:17 AM

  Wow,when I started reading this story a few months ago I absolutely loved it. (even if Gerard seemed brain-dead sometimes ;p) But now it's just fucking awesome.:D Really ^^
  Keep up the good work ;)

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  (#) MCR_ROCK_RHCP 2012-07-28 08:08:41 AM

  Even better. hmmm. Hmmmmmmmm.
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  HOW THE FUCK IS THAT EVEN POSSIBLE?!?!?!?
  
  
  Steph x_•

  Author's response

  Ahaaaha, thank you xD

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  (#) ChasingPavementsxoxo 2012-07-29 09:38:29 AM

  I liked the rewritten version, but I'm not sure if I liked this or the first version better. This version is really good though c:
  
  xxIzzy

  Author's response

  Thanks (: Really? The first version of chapter one was really shitty in my opinion- bad grammar, layout and just sloppily written :L Thanks for reviewing!

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