The final scene of First of the Gang to Die.
(#) MyChemFreak 2012-02-03 02:41:20 PMHow did she do it? That was so amazingly beautiful, I genuinely am crying. I don't know how she managed to make that so beautiful and so moving but perhaps it's just a natural gift she had? I don't know. I do know I love it.
Thank you, for uploading this.
(#) FlyingSmoke 2012-02-03 03:09:28 PMIt's beautiful. I am crying my eyes out, despite this being fiction. Lorna... Lorna made this the most romantically suicidal chapter, novella, I have ever seen. I was crying at the beginning, and then Frank was dying. And I began crying my eyes out.
I thank you for posting this. It's beautiful in so many ways.
(#) SyraStrange 2012-02-03 03:36:02 PMWhat the fuck? I'm fucking crying... Like some... I don't know, what's some weak, pathetic thing? You never cease to amaze me. I hope you're dancing up there. And laughing and smiling. This is - I don't even know. I'm at a loss for words.
(#) fatherfuckingmeese 2012-02-03 07:55:48 PMI'm crying right now. . .She is now my inspiration. That was the greatest, saddest story I've ever read. The worst part was reading when Gerard slits his throat. . . But that, . . this story was perfect.
/Lauren, I hope your happy up there, and I want you to know that you are the greatest author I've ever seen. I'm so sorry you had to be up there at such a young age. But I'll never understand. Even though I've never met you, I'd consider you a friend. I miss looking for First of The Gang To Die updates. Hopefully someday I'll be able to write as good as you did. When ever I look at a 2% milk carton I think of you. :) Cheesy, I know, but hey, it's something that I'll always think about. Tell everyone up there I said hi. You are one amazing girl, don't ever forget that./
(#) AdnarimSmada 2012-02-03 09:55:22 PMUpsetting.
I ended up listening to 'L'Appuntamento (Sentado A'beira do Caminho)' by Andrea Bocelli while I read that. That's a classical Italian artist. So it really did fit with the atmosphere, being it was in straight Italian and all.
I didn't cry amazingly. It's hard for me to cry at fiction though Lornaigh has moved me to tears several times before. It did touch my heart though, don't get me wrong.
That was exceedingly stunning my dear. Just lovely. Morbid, yes but alas, the proper end to a tragedy. It couldn't be avoided.
Lornaigh Ni Ionnrachtaigh, you're the stuff of legends.
(#) AlbinoBlackSheep 2012-02-04 08:25:39 AMMy god.....
Beautiful. Abosoultely beautiful. I don't know how she did it. I'm crying so much right now, even though I knew they were going to die.
I love this story so much, I'll probably be crying about it for the next week or so.
If I could thank Lornaigh for such beautiful writing, I would not hesitate right now. I hope she's in the best place possible.
Goddammit, now I've started crying again.
(#) PineappleExpress 2012-02-04 12:24:29 PMIt is impossible for me to stop crying roght now. That was so beautiful. I don't know how she could turn something so sad and depressing into something absolutely beautiful. Lornaigh, you were so inspirational and you left me speechless after that.