(#) scarlett_fitch2027 2012-02-11WOW. Dude, think you've outdone yourself a little this time! This chapter wasn't just hot. It was HAWT!! I could never write a sex scene one like that, I'm way too awkward. Yours was really well written but what else would I expect from you?
But Jamie walked in! :O There's gonna be some hell to pay. And God Gerard, will he ever be able to talk to Frank without issuing some nonsense? He makes me cry a little inside every time he does!!
Awesome chapter, as usual. :D
(#) Heymimusic 2012-02-13You.... You're trying to kill me, aren't you ?! xD I could not stop laughing !! This is better than a Black Veil Brides or Asking Alexandria interview with Bryan Stars!! I didn't just fall from the cliff, I fell off of Everest and am still falling down, laughing along the way x) my god, I just can't explain how much I loved this chapter. I can't wait to see what shit is gonna happen next!
(#) DisenchantedEnding 2012-02-13OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GODDDDDDDDDDDDD. THIS WAS AMAZING OH MY GOD I'M JUST SO OH MY LORDDD.
MY FLABBERING MOUTH OH MY LORD.
just.. OH MY GOD. This was out-fucking-standing and oh my God and I cannot believe my eyes!
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