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Birth of and First Target: Ino
During his training trip, Naruto is given a scroll which holds the secrets in how to seduce and ensnare women. A scroll he uses at first on the women and kunoichi around him but soon on the Shinob...
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Eroninja
(#) Fanficreader71 2013-01-30
Great chapter, I enjoyed reading it and I will be looking forward to reading the next chapter.Eroninja
(#) reyman 2013-03-01
Hello I'm new.
I aready read most of the chapter,
and you you wrote an interesting story.I wonder how you going to handle the war without itach & orochimaru.
Can you please add these girl:
Karin-Uzumaki chronicles
Tsubaki-Both anime(matzuri strikes back)and game (black shadow)
Honoka-adventure at sea ark(I'd forgot the exact episode)
meno-uzumaki chonicles 2(shirogane clan).
Most of these girls have never been in hentai or lemons,and possibly never will since most of them are game characters or aren't important
to the story.If you need more info on them go to the naruto wiki.Eroninja
(#) DeathTitan 2013-03-28
Really glad to have found this story again, especially since it's fairly unique than most other fan fictions involving lemons/harems. Granted the opening scene was rather meh, with the predictable OC giving Naruto the specific technique that "changes" everything. However; I just can't picture any canon character just handing over such a technique to "Naruto" of all people, so that's not such a big issue to me.
Still, the chapter's good despite that minor issue although one of the concerns I've got is whether he continues to use the move as his signature technique later on. I know most would say the shadow clone or spiraling sphere techniques should take precedence, but I'd disagree with that given the story's direction being more sexually based.
I do like you chose Ino to start off the story, and wonder if the ending might just be one mass orgy? Ah well, story's not quite over yet so I've got time to muse over that. Much respect from continuing on the story when it could've been easier to stop or quit.
Diligently reading and reviewing, Titan.Eroninja
(#) blackbankai 2014-04-17
will sara's daughter ask her about naruto being her dream warrior.Eroninja
(#) MattyD 2015-02-09
I've read through this story twice in as many years, but never thought to comment or review. Going through it this time I'm going to hit every chapter and let you know how I've felt about it going forward.
Everything plot wise is fine, though I have noticed a weird tendency for run on sentences, or odd pauses during a particular thought process.
Still, over all very nice. You capture Ino's hesitancy/irritation between Naruto and Sakura, as well as set the stage for a rather ecchi storyline to continue. I know I'll probably get annoyed as I tend to during Naruto's more emo moments as he has them fairly regularly through out the story (Least he did the last time I did a read through), but I'll write down what I've thought concerning those instances as I approach those chapters.
Write on, good maestro.Eroninja
(#) DanteKajin 2015-10-30
My first time on Ficwad reading this story. You did us all a favour by moving here for easy reading. Great job!
And great story, I'm look forward to what you have up your sleeve.;-DAuthor's response
Thank you. Although it was sort of out of necessity. Thankfully FicWad doesn't have the nasty habit of deleting stories just because its moderators don't like the content.
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