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Birth of and First Target: Ino
During his training trip, Naruto is given a scroll which holds the secrets in how to seduce and ensnare women. A scroll he uses at first on the women and kunoichi around him but soon on the Shinob...
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Eroninja
(#) QueenMac 2017-04-09
Pretty ambitious to retell Shippuden. Such a great story! Character development is spot on and the sex scenes are vivid. Are you just retelling Shippuden (maybe a user can answer) or are movies and/or Boruto on your list as well?
Anyway, very surprised Ino became the first but it also makes so much sense!Author's response
Thank you! Some of the elements from the earlier movies will make it into the story.
But, I'll never touch anything born of the ending, including Boruto. While Shippuden did a lot to sap my enjoyment of the series over the years, it wasn't until the ending that it became clear that the Naruto that brought me to the story was a fraud. As such, I'll never touch anything from Boruto, as I wouldn't want to promote it in any kind of way. I hope you continue to enjoy my story. Thank you for reading!Eroninja
(#) xiaomaome 2017-05-19
Smut-even with plot-if it goes on too long, can become excessive. I suggest you keep your stories short (40k or less) and maybe more, if there is enough plot. overall, still a good readAuthor's response
I respectfully disagree. To me, this is more a personal preference on your part, then a hard and fast rule to live by.Eroninja
(#) Dylemin 2017-09-10
Reading through for my second time, and I have given myself the job of reviewing every chapter.
So as for chapter one, The use of a new minor character in Kanji is brilliant as it seamlessly explains the acquisition of the new jutsu and allows for the plot of Naruto to continue unaffected until this turning point. Naruto's character in this story truly reflects how one would expect him to after his training, rather than having him revert to his brattish behavior. The mix of sex and plot did seem a little overdone but this is do to needing to set up the rest of the story. Overall, well written with minor grammatical or spelling errors to be expected in a solo endeavor as large as this. 9/10 Great start for a great story.Eroninja
(#) Dylemin 2017-10-29
Following my abject failure to review every chapter, I have decided to try again as I feel my last reviews were lackluster...Anyway, Reading through for the third time and I still love this opening. The fracture point from the OT is very well done. While I feel that Naruto might be just a bit to confident in his meeting with Ino, the way Naruto acts makes sense for who he was as this point. The fight between Sakura and Ino fits in perfectly with all their other fights. Ino's character seems more flushed out than the original. And Naruto's goal is exactly what one would expect from his boastful nature. A perfect opening for this work.Eroninja
(#) Karasu-Tenka 2017-11-11
So I found this fic a couple of weeks ago, and I am absolutely hooked! I love your writing style, I love the character development that you have given to so many really great and honestly underused side characters, and I LOVE where you have taken the story! I cannot wait to see where the tale of the Eroninja goes. Looking forward to your next update with baited breath.Eroninja
(#) Daniel2610994 2017-11-13
Oh man you really set the bar too high, befire I could read fics that were good at best and enjoy them but then I read this story and that went to hell, because after reading this that I consider the best naruto story ever created now when I read those stories I can't help but compare them to this masterpiece and they fell really short against this :v actually I was reading a story that was good enough but the author complicated things a lot out of nowhere for naruto and only because he wanted to make things more interesting....so I closed that window and decided to better spend my time reading the best story instead of wasting time with subpar fics, and here we are again xD damn this will be the fourth time I read this story I think :vEroninja
(#) DriedSquid 2017-11-27
First time I'm really into a Lemon-Naruto fanfic. Keep up the good work! More girls and please update soon!Eroninja
(#) Dylemin 2018-01-25
Alright, three and I promise final time I review chapter one, but by the gods Lemon Sage! I decided to reread the entire story again after the amazing chapter that just came out. I really loved this opening, strong, explanative, and ties the old story in beautifully. Knowing everything I do now, man did your level of foreshadowing far exceed what I thought, and mind you I already thought you had the best foreshadowing of any author I have ever read. Just amazing.
Alright, I'll stop re-reviewing chapter one now but just know that if I do keep rereading this story when your new chapters come out. I might have to come back to say how amazing it is again.
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