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• The Triangle Ritual

  (#) jabarber69 2006-10-16

  Hey cool story, very well written. You definitely have a good plot, while technically used by other authors before, you did one better with how well written it is and you seem to have developed a interesting plot with the first dream sequence and then with the more fuller and detailed conversations with hermione and her parents then I believe I have ever seen. Now you have me anxiously awaiting to see where you take this interesting story. In fact you have me really wondering how far you will take this triangle thing?

  Author's response

  Thank you for your review.
  
  The plotline for year six stands and a rough draft of several chapters is already written. There will be more about Ron and his dreams.
  
  I'm glad you like the conversations. I just tried to write some action sequences and they are horrible.
  
  You might guess where the story leads if you read the summary again ...

• The Triangle Ritual

  (#) DavidMPotter 2006-10-16

  Another good chapter. I look forward to more.

  Author's response

  Thank you for your review. I'll likely update once a month with about 3.500 to 4.000 words per chapter.

• The Triangle Ritual

  (#) banner 2006-10-17

  I really like the portrayal of Hermione's parents. All I have to do is visualise MY child in mortal peril (at age eleven!) and I can see the Grangers as perfectly reasonable and responsible parents.
  Thank God Dumbledore didn't try to isolate Harry again. The complete lack of any kind of emotional healing has always been a major flaw in JKR's world.
  I'm looking forward to more of this story.

  Author's response

  Yeah, that was one thing I wondered about since I read the second book.
  
  But read chapter three and four (the latter might be up in about two weeks).

• The Triangle Ritual

  (#) daewos 2006-10-19

  Interesting start - look forward to seeing how you develop the theme.

  Author's response

  The story won't be very fast paced, so I'll need some while until the plot really developes further.

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