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The car crash hearts. (Ryan's song)
3 reviewsPENULTIMATE CHAPTER!!! ... deserves a title of its own. Very short but dw it's a good one =] ... And if you don't think so don't worry cause the finale will be awesome and lengthy.
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Down the road, not across the street
(#) storytimexfanfics 2007-07-20
that was amazing.. i almost cried...
you are such an amazing writer.. i apsolutly love your stories..Author's response
awwww wow thank u =] XDDown the road, not across the street
(#) Alysha16 2007-07-20
omg!!!!it took me 45 minutes to be able to actually post a review because i cried so much that i had an asthma attack (seriously,and im still crying.normally i would feel stupid for crying over something like this but right now i dont care.)...
words cannot explain how sad and moving that was it was amazing...
in the begining i genuinly thought that she had passed on.it really scared me.then when the nurse told ry that she was a fighter i was slightly relieved, and filled with hope that she just may pull through this and be okay.after wat happend to ryan i seriously almost fell out of my chair and for some reason i started screaming at my computer.then when amara's line went flat i really fell out of my chair and sat on the floor sobing and having the worst asthma attack that i have had in almost four years.it was as if there hearts and bodies were connected in some way.sort of like in the begining amara's heart/body knew that it had someone special that was worth fighting for,but once he had the accident her body lost that connection with him and felt that it had nothing to live for.
this is the first story that ive ever read that has ever made me get this emotional.i know that this is all fiction but this story has actually made me care about wat happends to the characters.please update soon.i really need to know wat is going to happen to them, whether its good or bad i just really want to know(hopefully it is good).
~Alysha~
P.S. that last cliff hanger really hurt...lol...have i told u lately how bad my addiction is?...lol...again ur an amazing writer and that song was perfect for this chapter (that album is awsome)please update asap!!!Author's response
awww alysha honey... hugs hope ur well... i never intended for my writing to almost kill someone (u know what i mean) lol ,,, haha ur awesome & u rock
hope ur better now... n finale will be up soonDown the road, not across the street
(#) can-you-feel-this 2007-07-21
Oh hell no. no no no NO NO NO!!!!!! Oh my god you can't kill BOTH OF THEM!!!Author's response
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well you'll find out within the next two days hopefully i can upload em =]Down the road, not across the street
(#) can-you-feel-this 2007-07-21
OK, sorry about that. I just had to get over the initial shock. Alright, real review time. Well, first off, listening to "Bury Me" made this chapter soooo much more, I think real is the word I'm looking for. It gave the words a feeling, and emotion. And it's not weird that you listen to music to get inspiration, because I (and I'm sure many other people) do that too. The beginning with the funeral, HOLY CRAP you scared the shit out of me. I knew it had to miss the heart!! But, the crash... I cried, I'm sure anyone who's been following this story cried. And Amara flatlined exactly when Ryan crashed? It's almost as if there was some kind of ethereal force keeping their souls connected, but the crash broke the string. It's quite beautiful, and tragic, if you think about it. This story has made me feels so many emotions, it's hard to keep up! One second I'm laughing, the next I'm crying. But right now, it's the latter. And if they both died (if they must die, which I really hope not), I think I would rather have them die TOGETHER, than have one live while the other passes. Kind of like Romeo and Juliet in a way, star-crossed lovers and all. Alright, I'm done babbling. I'm going to find a box of Kleenex somewhere. An update soon, would be fantastic, and appreciated. "All good things must come to an end..."
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(#) angellbaby28 2007-07-21
that was SO sad, but it was so well written! great job!Author's response
thank u heaps... =]Down the road, not across the street
(#) patdfan0702 2007-07-23
DO NOT KILL THEM! I REPEAT DO NOT KILL THEM! ...omg. I'm crying. Well-written tho.But still oh so sad...Down the road, not across the street
(#) noxcamisado 2007-08-13
oh my gosh, i honestly almost cried...
wow. your such an amazing writer, i couldn't even begin to describe.
you know, there are very few writers that I'll follow. I usually only read finished stories. But not thisa one. This is amazing...
Just though I'd let you know, you've inspired me to write my own. Your like... my internet hero..
oh, and please, don;t kill them.. and iff you do, make the story end happy... like honestly, happy endingings always prevail :]
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