its not that is harder to read its just that i think you should try and connect each of them.
see lets just picture is a play. (cuz my imagination is pretty wide and i do imagine them doing whatever you write)
so usually when you get a scene its everything that revolves around that place and time in one scene.
I think i'm not making myself clear.
For example, there are part were its sort of the same shit happening but you divided up and it kind of gives the impression that something different is about to happen when in fact its the same.
Oh forget it, i probably just confused the hell out of ya.
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