Another wonderful chapter! I loved this one- thanks to the comments about Arhcie and Jay being hotties and Archie and Atlanta finally getting 'matchmade' by Jay and Theresa.
I'm sorry I haven't reviewed before- I admit it, I was lazy. But I'll try not to from now on, I'll be an active reviewer ;D
Oh dear, poor Atlanta. Maybe Arhcie could help her in the 'battle' against Felicity- not sure how but maybe embarassing Felicity a lot by, I dunno, kissing Atlanta in front of her or something? Except that's a little out-of-character for both of them, since they're both 'new' to their relationship.
I love the fact that the boys have sprouted (I'm suffering form this confusion right now as well- my belief is that there's something in the water back in my old town. I used to be fairly tall just a year ago and now, among them, I'm a shrimp)
The way you're portraying Theresa's character is... interesting. Don't get the impression that I don't like- I just think I have to get used to it.
Your dialogue is very nice as well. I for one, am terrible with character interaction and joking around and such. You do it quite well.
Their last names- more crative than my versions (haven't yet used them- but once I get my, as I like to call it, VERY loosly Phantom of the Opera-based fanfiction up (and if you read it) you'll see what I mean) I like the irony in Arhcie's last name too, quite funny.
Not much I can add for critiquing, other than the fact of Theresa's character- but that's how you've chosen to portray her, so I won't argue with that ;)
Althgouh, another thing I must say I love about your writing is the fact that you make things REAL. I just don't seem to be able to do that- but you have real-life scenarios, relationships and couple-moments. I think that has got to be my most favorite thing about your writing.
Awesome job, and I hope you update soon, please!
~Demenior