Having twins do naughty things to you would be a wonderful way to wake up in the morning. If only things like that happened in real life. Sigh. Of course, if that sort of thing did happen in real, I wouldn’t know what the hell to do with them. The pressure would be too much for me to handle. That or I'd have a fatal heart attack right the moment after waking up and seeing the twins.
I mentioned before that having an aggressive Hermione and Luna are interesting. I’ll have to work it into the story somehow. Perhaps I’ll have Harry say something along the lines of “You know, I prefer you over the Hermione from my home reality.”
“Really, why is that?” the brunette asked.
“Well, the other versions of you and Luna like to hold knifes to my other harem girls, it’s really a mood killer.”
I laughed at Hermione’s short hair reference (frames her face) and how it mirrored my story.
Ooo, another Star Trek reference besides the title. Good one.
I like the concept of Evil-Hermione and Evil-Luna training Harry. I can see them now teaching him the intricacies of dark magic and its everyday uses. Perhaps they can teach him on a reward structure, such as “If you can cast the Cruciatus properly, I’ll let you bugger Luna tonight.” or “The Killing Curse is rather difficult. Therefore, if you can cast it before the hour’s up, we’ll let you watch all of your harem girls during their after supper orgy.”
Very nice, thanks for writing it.
Shawn (a.k.a. cloneserpents)
Author's response
- What? You don't have a pair of teen aged twins waking you up like that every morning?
- They only do the knife thing when they need to establish a little discipline... Or if they're in a bad mood...
- I'm planning on an alternative Tonks perving on Hermione's titantic boobies.
- Hermione and Luna aren't evil, no more than the transplanted Harry is. They're just dealing with the circumstances they find themselves in...