thats the cutest thing ever! i absolutely loved the way you wrote it. you really got it to be little kid-ish. my fave by far :)
Author's response
Thank you! I was actually kind of worried about this one, because when I wrote it, I knew it was from the view point of a little kid. I thought about writing it how Charley would nararrate at that age, but that seemed like it would be too distracting, and probably make the story hard to understand, so I went with just normal narration. I'm glad I pulled it off!