Thank Gerard's lucky Skelton pajamas! LIBERTY IS OKAY!! (more or less.) and Frank is okay too!! HALLEIGHLUHIA!! (lock and load... :)
(okay, now I'm gonna sound like a priss. The editor in me, i guess. You said head again. An after that it said Taylor was NO pointing the gun at Penny. You meant now, right? I SO only meant this to be constructive criticism, not nasty comments. I LOOOOOOOVEEEE the story!!)
Update soon, deary?
Author's response
thank you, and sorryyy :) i completely understand, ima go through it, the reason its so bad in this one is cause i wrote most of it on an iphone xD but thankies, and will do :) xo