Omgee ker, I love it!! Now I see why it took so long!! Next chapter a bit quicker, please?!
Also, you should bring the crackhead up later in the story again. He would make an interesting character. Or just a funny joke, constantly asking Gee to grab his Coke... :)
Author's response
yes, I'm working on it.
i'll try to refer to the crackhead some more :)