Thumbs up
Not often I read a story that captures my interest in the first chapter, it usually takes the second or third to fully contaminate me. However, this fic is different. Perhaps delve into detail a little more, and if this is a Frerard, I think I'm going to enjoy it.
Hope you update soon.
Good job.
xoxox
-Frankie.
Author's response
Hey aww thanks thats really nice and i have got a lot better and have done more detail and stuff :) i have done 16 more chapters i just want to know what people think so thanks again and i will post the next chapters when i get hope :) xx