OMGEE Ker, you've done it YET AGAIN! Hoping I can be in it at some point...? Like, a GOOD friend of Gee's or something? (if you get my drift... ;)
Or, any other place you need a character, Natalie (FallenAvengingAngel) is happy to help!!! LOVE YOU SIS!
Great writing! One thing- the first sentence or so, you put 2106 instead of 2016. :)