(#) Rake 2006-10-19
Nice update...as usual...I am completly in love with the level of originality and inovation in this fic. First of all I think I only read about aprox 3-4 fics where Harry doesn't live happily ever after with the first girl he gets romanticly involved with...very few authors really understand that there is no way in hell that you can possibly find your "soul mate" at 16 in your first try (without the level of maturity that Harry has shown in your fic). The animagus/animage transformation was quaite simply the best I have ever read. The settup, the ritual and the hunt were magnificent but the new concept about about clarity was the best thing about it. The writting stile however is the thing that gives your fic the edge over all the other "standard" fics out there. Overall the originality and the new conceps make this fic a must read in the world of fanfiction and I personally think it's the best indy!Harry story out there
p.s. I just have to ask...what girl do you plan do make Harry end up with...because Funbags and Weasel slut are out of the picture...right? PLEASE, PLEASE don't make Harry forgive them...I beg of you....
Author's response
Thanks for the review. It's filed on ff.net under Harry/Luna for a reason, though nothing of interest is going to happen until the sequel. Glad you enjoyed it.~Jim