Oh, lordy, the emotion in this chapter! You've really brought it all together now Nuuoa! I was crying with everyone when they were together, though I wasn't as angry at Jay as Odie and Neil were. I was cheering on Jay when he went to battle Cronus ('If only she were here!')and comused with Theresa in that grey world between life and death, well, no life. You wrote it all so well, especially at the beginning when you were introducing us to this world.The sort of confusion you gave with different thoughts and how you explained that while she didn't have a memory, she liked the name 'Jayla' so we called her my that name until she remembered 'Theresa'. I like Jayes, I admit that made me giggle.
And did I see some addition going on there? Yay for math! I'm eagerly looking forwards to an update, and if you get stuck just ask me or help- if you want some!
~Demenior
Author's response
Thanks so much for the possitive feedback Demenior. It is much appreciated. I'm glad you liked the description in it. I worked hard at the beginning. Jayla and Jayes (Or Theresa and Sailboats) were really hard for me to describe... so I'm glad you were confused/intrigued.
And yes Herry can add! Go Herry! sniff I'm so proud. Honestly I got the idea from 'Noah'. Lol. The first inicial of Odie and Neil = O + N = No. Lol. And that would be much appriciated. Thanks Dem. ~Nuuoa Eclaire