Please, if your going to be a cridec tell ralphmullins what you don't like about the storie. If you are going to cry about stolen story then quote the orginal?. This story is not the best hp/xover story that I have read, but it has great potential. IE.. Stargate smackdown, he has the tec/magic that's being improved on and released to the world, ect. I give the story a #4