DD8 It's almost ovveeerr!
Man, you brong things together so beautifully and fluently- like it's not just a story, but and actual even that took place. I love your writing.
Now, I think you might want to go over the chapter because there were a few itty-bitty little spelling mistakes here and there.
Poor Jay. (poor Achie, but that's beside he point)
He's done so much, felt so much, learned so much, and is left with something less than whole. You really have to feel, not quite pity, but you can feel the hole that's left in him
I'm happy that he'll get one more goodbye. Who knows, maybe he'll be able to join her?
Author's response
turns crimson T-Thank you. Yeah I should... oops. I tell you it's all the update reviews I get! Lol. I forgot to check over this one. I'll do that. And yes poor Archie. You'll have too see, I don't really feel like killing anymore people... you'll see. (Honestly, it's happened so much that I doubt they would be sad.) XD -Nuuoa Eclaire