xDD Archie's cooking can be head- and smelt- a mile away! BEWARE!
So, first thing I wan tot get off my chest, is hurrah! I'm not the only author (in my knowlage) that has made Hera a 'bad guy'. But I love how you've put her in charcater, trying to keep Jay safe (because we all know she secretly favors him more than anyone on the team) and keep the team together, but not wanting to explain the whole situation. Wonderful characterization.
And wow, I didn't expect Jay and Theresa to break up, well they were never really together, so soon. Good job though, Jay being all Jay-ish and pondering over words, and not living for his heart. I'm expecting to see (possibly) some Archie/Theresa moments and/or pairing, Jay/Atlanta comming up as well, and from what it seems, some Jay/OC.
I bet that OC will end up being Jay's fling, and he'll have to realize that all along Theresa wasn't there to drap him down, but grab his hand while he's falling.
Can't wait for the next installment.
~Demenior
Author's response
BEWARE! Lol. And yes it's true, we must band together to defeat the evil forces of Hera! I feel so happy now. You made my day with that comment. And yes Hera has slight obsession with Jay.
Well I wouldn't call it a break up... but yes it was early. Stupid Jay! Or Hera... not sure. Actually for pairings I have far too many to put... but I'll give away that I have no Archie/Theresa or Atlanta/Jay... but that is a good plan... hmmm.... ponders. As for the rest, you'll have to wait.
Oh that's a great idea too! Why didn't I think of that... hmph! But I have a different thing in mind. Great guess though.
Wow. I just gave a lot away. Oops. -Nuuoa