Okay, first of all, it's really weird reading a story when the main character has your name AND your height. Anyway, to the actual review now. This is a really well done story so far. I love it. It's different from the other sorts of stories you read, and I really like your story. There's a bit of a sarcastic edge to it. Great job. I can't wait for the next chapter. XD
Alyssa