Bahaha, finally getting around to reading the latest two chapters of this fic. This was adorable. I can completely and totally see this scene playing out. It's awesome. I definitely liked it and didn't think it was 'mediocre' at all. :D
~Alyssa
Author's response
Huzzah! Oh, I'm so so glad you liked this one! I always worry whenever I post a chapter after spending just a few hours writing something. Much love to you! Thx33 Oh, I'm clever. Thanks + a heart.