Wow. Wonderful job.
I am so impressed by you and your awesome Archie-characterization.
Your Underworld sounded wonderful, just absolutely brilliant, and your characterization of the kids is simply amazing. Archie seems to be the immature little child he isn't given enough credit for being.
So now what? Will Archie go back tot he others, will he hide out for the three days? How on earth will he be able to sever a blood-tie between him and his father?
Wouldn't that also mean he can sense his father's presence?
And I really hope he gets a chance to heal up... but that'll probably be after he's really, really REALLY gotten beaten up, eh?
And where on earth did you find that Greek? If you've learned it in school, then I must be missing out!
Anywyas, your gym teacher must be proud ;D
And an update soon would be absolutely wonderful.
Demenior