FicWad

I really enjoy how you write young Lulu. She seems so strong, confident and happy. The fact that you imply that she has a unique bloodline is really intriguing.

I also like the little details you give us, like the fact that she once wore bright colors to distract from her pale complexion. Imagining her before the mirror in a black dress, finally embracing her uniqueness and comparing herself to her mother is an endearing sight.

Jecht's ribbing is cute, and I like that he invades a children's blitzball game in order to show off.

I also like that Auron's second meeting with Lulu renews his inspiration to complete the pilgrimage and defeat Sin.

A few English corrections:

"would forever remained the same" should be "would forever remain the same"

"had always wonders about her" should be "had always wondered about her"

"natives sang before" should be "natives sing before"

"we are no difference" should be "we are no different"

"and gets to see the", you don't need the word "gets" here.

"fiends normally hides" should be "fiends normally hide"

I hope you don't mind the nitpicks. :) They're just that.

I'm so glad you are writing this...I like multi-chapter works and more Aulu is always a good thing.