Wow, I can't believe you updated!
Thisbe and Jyros are so cute together :3 They make me feel warm and fuzzy inside.
And I love Jyros's character, he's like... Jay... without the Cronus-obsession-frothing-at-mouth-syndrome.
I can't wait to see what happens next, and how hera will try to keep the two of them apart. Man, I just can't wait for the next update, so hurry up and end school, and heal soon!
On the constructive part, some of the information/events were a little comfusing and probably needed more detail, or I need to read better. But it was wonderful regardless!
~Demenior