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• Awake

  (#) Smooshy 2008-06-18

  OMG!!! My brain is scurrying with absolutely no fucking clue what you're doing. Yeesh, I could say it's Bob at the door, or Mikey or Ray, but then that would be cheating wouldn't it. You absolutely must write the next chapter and FAST! Because Smooshy can only take so much. Beautiful phrasing through out all of it, and I am now more intrugued then ever to know about her and Frank's deal. I have many ideas but I'm keeping them under lock and key. I love love love it!
  
  xoxo Smooshy

  Author's response

  hahahaa!!!
  My brain is scurrying with uncertainty too!!
  
  Cheers
  Kat

• Awake

  (#) MCR_over 2008-06-18

  I betcha its the police man. OMG if not then who could it be. I wanna an explanation as to why he freaked when she said she loved him. I am baffled about their relationship

• Awake

  (#) Souxie-Noir 2008-06-19

  oh my god!
  this is really interesting..
  hmm maybe its her old boyfrriieenndd Raymond Toro hehe
  no!
  wow! Update soon!!
  
  

  Author's response

  hahaha....No.
  Mr. Toro was not the aforementioned ex boyfriend. Sorry dear.
  
  Cheers
  Kat

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