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I will post all of my PSOH drabbles under this title, each as separate chapters. The first: D and Leon at afternoon tea. (D/Leon implications)
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Pet Shop of Horrors: The Drabbles
(#) Quycksylver 2005-06-01
Cute drabble--just a couple of nitpicks. First of all, in the first paragraph, I'm assuming that's Leon's POV, but you might want to make that a little clearer. Secondly, you might want to clean up all those weird little symbol thingies as it makes your fic a little hard to read (especially for someone like me with really poor eyesight ^_^ )
I really liked D's last line--funny, and very D-ish!Author's response
Sometimes the symbols show up due to ficwad.com (and I'll edit them), other times it's the encoding which you can change by right clicking your screen and selecting a different encoding option.Pet Shop of Horrors: The Drabbles
(#) Quycksylver 2005-06-01
Cute drabble--just a couple of nitpicks. First of all, in the first paragraph, I'm assuming that's Leon's POV, but you might want to make that a little clearer. Secondly, you might want to clean up all those weird little symbol thingies as it makes your fic a little hard to read (especially for someone like me with really poor eyesight ^_^ )
I really liked D's last line--funny, and very D-ish!Pet Shop of Horrors: The Drabbles
(#) PatriciaLouise 2005-10-03
Very funny. I can't wait to read more!Pet Shop of Horrors: The Drabbles
(#) sanguineus 2006-04-26
Yes, yes, the end line was spectacular. :D
'the China bites' can also refer to D, yes? XDDD
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