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Harry Potter and the Marriage Contracts
(#) smile2023 2008-06-23
OMG YOU SOOOO HAVE TO UPDATE HURRY HURRY I CANT WAITHarry Potter and the Marriage Contracts
(#) issabissa 2008-06-25
Wow wow wow!!!!!!!!! You evil thing you leaving us there like that!!!! Excitedly waiting more from this fabulous story!!!!!Keep up the great work!!!!!!Harry Potter and the Marriage Contracts
(#) deltanumber4 2008-06-26
This story is really awesome, i came across it and as soon as i started reading it, i just couldn't stop. Dude you have some serious talent. Now the only question i have for you is... WHEN IS THE NEXT CHAPTER GOING TO BE DONE!!!Harry Potter and the Marriage Contracts
(#) egb67 2008-07-01
I'm really, really enjoying this story! I didn't expect the Harry/Daphne angle (I'm almost exclusively an HHr shipper), but you've done a great job with this and I'm very impressed. The writing is tight and well thought out and you've done a great job with the story line. It moves and flows honestly and there are no jagged points or glaring omissions that make the story uneven.
SO - please keep writing!
Regards,
the_scribblerHarry Potter and the Marriage Contracts
(#) Zucht 2008-07-02
Still a terrific story! I canniot wait until the next chapterHarry Potter and the Marriage Contracts
(#) drifter 2008-07-03
CLIFF HANGERS!!! GRRRRRRRRRRrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!!!!!
Still????? Makes for a perfect setup for a tremendous blow off.
Reasons:
Perfect time for "Harry James Potter-Black" to announce himself and demand satisfaction, on:
1. Dumbledork gets all his behind the scenes control revealed;
His and Weasley's Mother and younger children's plans, betrayal and theft shown with the help of the goblin's;
and, Dumbledork finally gets to find out how Moldishorts died and can be offered the chance to experience it too (others have hidden problems by transfiguring it into something else, simple and small; nice time to reverse it).
2. Harry now has Daphne's contract, bet Goblin's could show it as signed shortly after originally received;
Daphne's father would really in trouble since he would have interfered with the courtship, and has helped arranged her rape while she is effectively under Harry's protection.
The father and Count who did the rape could be arrested,
OR,
it is revealed that Harry now owns ALL the pairs debts, now called due, then they are challenged (speciously fun if its after Harry has revealed the death of the dark lord and done something about dumbledore).
Not trying to write your story, just like being evil on occasion. Thanks for the chance.
Also thanks a VERY GOOD read, I definitely looking forward to seeing where you go with this.
May the MUSES always be with you!!!
^_-
Harry Potter and the Marriage Contracts
(#) zicou 2008-07-05
Waouh ...
this story is very great, awesome !!!
Why don't you post it on the WC3 ?
Continuuuuuuue!
Z.Harry Potter and the Marriage Contracts
(#) mekareami 2008-07-06
I have enjoyed your story so far and eagery await the next update :)Harry Potter and the Marriage Contracts
(#) pstibbons 2008-07-16
best lines:
“Sirius would be helping me kidnap her.”
“Probably, yeah. While calling you a girl.”
The Meet The Parents scene was good. I suppose the Harry-Daph-Nev-Hannah and Justin-Mione storylines will merge again sometime?Harry Potter and the Marriage Contracts
(#) TxA_GunFighter 2008-07-21
Outstanding chapter, I do hope Harry and Nev put the sob in his place.
gunny
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