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You Remind Me Of A Former Love.
(#) infinite-oddity 2008-06-22
Finally. :3
It's about time Ry got some hot female tongue action.
Author's response
LOL!
Ah, yes.
:]
Thank you tons for the review.You Remind Me Of A Former Love.
(#) Life_is_42 2008-06-22
Ok so i just left a really long review for this chapter, but after i clicked 'submit' it redirected me, so i'm not sure if it went through, and i could cry if it hasn't.
if it hasn't, i promise i will leave a big fat review for the next chapter, that will try to also reiderate my feelings about this chapter
(and the beautiful first kiss! yay!).
at the moment i'm too mad at my computer to do that now though. grrrr.Author's response
Awe, I'm sorry. =[
It didn't go through, but that's okay. :]
I'm just glad to hear you liked the chapter, considering the 'beautiful kiss' comment
Thank you for the review.
And my ultimate gratitude toward you, since you had such great difficulty with FicWad. Believe me, I HATE when FicWad acts all screwy like that. I feel your pain. :]You Remind Me Of A Former Love.
(#) medicatedlives 2008-06-22
YAY! An update! I've really been looking forward to another chapter and it's awesome! I can't wait for the next one!
(and as in a response to your response to the review I left in the last chapter:)
I think you might have misunderstood me. When I said "some typical love story" I meant that it was more original, even realistic compared to some ordinary generic things I've read. So the "little bit of romance" is in fact, not a bad thing. =)
Author's response
Awe. I'm glad you liked the chapter.
I'm pretty sure that I responded longer than this. Oh well. FicWad doesn't seem to like me much
Anywho, what I said, previously, is that I'm relieved to find that you weren't disappointed with the romance I had in mind. I was actually fretting about it quite a bit, with hopes to not disappoint you or fellow reviewers. But, all is well now. :]
Thank you for the review. :]You Remind Me Of A Former Love.
(#) webba141 2008-06-23
hello =]
yeah, im not that kind of person that can really give advice, but i can say that i love this last chapter...
its sooo cuteAuthor's response
Ah, that's alright.
Just as long as you review, then I'm happy. :]
And I'm also happy that you liked the chapter. I was actually worried people were going to hate it. =/
shrugs
Thank you for the review. :]You Remind Me Of A Former Love.
(#) MrSz-Or3o 2008-06-23
OMG
that was soo cute
please write more
soooon
much love
MrSz.Or3oAuthor's response
lol.
Thanks.You Remind Me Of A Former Love.
(#) Emo_Monkey_ATD 2008-06-23
aww. first kiss. that was so cute.
i can't wait for the next chapter.
something with lots of happiness and kissies please?Author's response
Yay! A new reviewer!
Thank you for the review.
And the next chapter may involve happiness and kisses. :]
You never know. ;]You Remind Me Of A Former Love.
(#) Life_is_42 2008-06-23
Ok so i waited a day to cool off/make better with ficwad =D so i feel equal to doing a decent review lol.
I love how Ryan and Helen compliment each other; her warmth vs. his...well...Ryanism (new word :p).I love how Helen is opening Ryan's cynical view of the world to see that he needs someone other than himself. It is so intriguing... I want to know why Helen needs a boy in need, and am looking forward to learning more about Helen in future chapters, aside from her goodness.
another important note (i'm going to keep raving about your story by the way because it breaks the cliches! its orginal! i've been checking ficwad on and off for a while waiting for a good story to pop up! its such a relief):
Your supporting/Original characters are in fact orginal and distinct from one another!! some stories you read, you can't tell each character apart, their tone is the same, and they are mary-sueish. but not yours! yay!
Helen is warm, open, and very good, but maybe she has some stuff going on too. her personality is a compliment to ryan's.
Nicole is like Ryan. cynical, and slightly crazy when she's in the midst of emotional upset (she bakes like a crazy woman...ryan sits out in the rain and beats up his self esteem, bless him).
and Elle is opposed to Ryan. Matter of fact, no nonsense and tough.
squeee. and once again...the kiss was beautiful and wonderfully timed and just what both ryan and helen needed =D.Author's response
My Gawd.
You have no idea how happy you made me with this review. In fact, I read it like, three times already. I love you, so much. :]
Alrighty. First of all, I love the word 'Ryanism'. And I'm going to use it from now on. :]
That's exatly what I'm trying to portray! How Ryan and Helen compliment each other and that Ryan is learning that he needs someone other than himself (no matter how much he doesn't want to admit it)
Ah, I agree about the mary-sueish characters. And I'm glad I make my characters so disticnt from each other. I usually fear that my characters won't be realistic, but I'm glad someone thinks otherwise. :]
And that is like, the perfect description of my characters. I swear. :]
And yes, yes. Helen does have some problems of her own. I can't make her seem so entirely perfect, even if Ryan does think she is. :]
Gahh, and I'm also glad you liked the kiss. I was actually worrying that people may have not wanted that. But, I am UBER happy to see that people liked the fact that there is a little romance going on between them. :]
Thank you for this great review. It made my whole day. No lie. :]
You rock. :]
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