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• Trying Not To Make A Scene

  (#) SomeoneIveNeverMet 2008-06-29

  The chapter lengths are nice and it's a good start :) update soon?? :D

  Author's response

  Thank you! I'll start on it asap. =]

• Trying Not To Make A Scene

  (#) Freya_x 2008-06-29

  The lengths fine. Its great so far and I'm not sure how you could improve it.
  I like your writing style. Update soon.

  Author's response

  I will. Thanks for the review!

• Trying Not To Make A Scene

  (#) XxIceCreamHeadachexX 2008-06-29

  Ah, yes.
  The length is very, very good. Just right. :]
  
  I love your writing style. You give such grace with adjectives and whatnot. Its great to read something that isn't choppy and unflowing. :]
  
  I also like the characters you have here. Both Brendon and Abigal are a little wacky and the dialogue is fantastic. Very realistic.
  
  Update soon!
  
  

  Author's response

  Ooh yay! Thank you so much for reviewing. It means a lot getting compliments from you. =)

• Trying Not To Make A Scene

  (#) Life_is_42 2008-06-30

  AW cute! and surprisingly realistic the way they have met. :) and i like that she doesn't know who he is. that is a HUGE plus!
  
  the length seemed perfect this chapter! a noted improvement from the first...but the first was more of a prologue anyway, so that fit well too.
  
  and you write very well, may i say. so keep up the good work and the writing! =)

  Author's response

  Thank you for the review! =)

• Trying Not To Make A Scene

  (#) sillyperson 2008-07-03

  This most certainly is the begining of something beatiful :)
  Please update
  You have a really good way with words
  X

  Author's response

  Thank you! :]

• Trying Not To Make A Scene

  (#) xoconverse 2008-07-14

  this is cute!
  and i do agree with everyone, the lengths of these chapters are perfect.
  
  update soon please :]

  Author's response

  thanks for the review!

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