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For the Greater Good
(#) Cateagle 2008-06-30
DUM-DE_DUM-DUM {end Dragnet theme}. Yeah, it looks like the Weasley's were nowhere near as "Light" as they wanted people to think if they did all that to Harry and trained up their kids that way. I don't blame Harry a bit for the moves he's made and I'm sure that Hermione, Luna, Pansy, and, now, Fleur will appreciate his protection from the grave. 'Twould be amusing to see the reactions of the different Weasleys to this letter and I'm really wondering about that mentioned article in /The Daily Prophet/. It sounds like 'most everyone got what they deserved.For the Greater Good
(#) twilliams1797 2008-07-01
this story, all of it must have been tough to write.
all I can say is..wow.Author's response
I can't say that it was to hard to write. Almost everything anybody sees of mine is first draft with minor editing and I usually post on the the day after I write it so I catch errors a little better. I'm glad you found it interesting though thanks for the review.For the Greater Good
(#) Geovanni_Luciano 2008-07-01
I read it, and I went through your reviews. You've not had one bad review. This will be your first. There are two things that are really lacking in this story. One, there are tons of spelling context errors in the story. Two, it's one demensional. You're telling a story through letters, which doesn't allow for dialogue or reaction. With that, you have an interesting underlying story that just isn't there. What happened between Hermione and Ron and why did they go their separate ways. Is Harry dead? Is this story over? Because I went back to the story description and it isn't logged as complete. There seems to be more to tell, but that's up for you.
Geovanni LucianoAuthor's response
First off I would like to say wow. I don't think that I ever had a review flat out say it was going to be a bad review before. Second I'm sorry that you found it one demisional. I just wrote what I did at the time. The spelling errors come from the fact that I'm the only one who looked it over since I don't have a beta so I take all the blame. I left it like I did not to be lazy but for you to go is he dead. I might come back an bring the past to life more, but for now I set out to write a story in this time frame I had set. So this is where I will leave it. Thanks for the review.For the Greater Good
(#) dennisud 2009-01-08
A very imaginative yet scathing story, and to me of not just the way JKR envisioned this Wizarding World but also it tells of what She must have some sense of.
BTW the only real problem is the horrible grammar, so please get a beta for this and other stories!
dennisud
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