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A Sickish Love Feeling 2
(#) Supergirl2009 2016-03-26
Hey BlackRaven66!
I love Teen Titns as well. Just saying the story is very good but you should work on the commas and speech lines. They shouls be like this:
"Hey Bob," said Joe, "Do you wanna go to the bar?"
Not like: "Come on, lets go."said Beast Boy.
You get it? Maybe look at websites or books.
Bai. Remember to check out my stories when i post some.A Sickish Love Feeling 2
(#) Supergirl2009 2016-03-26
Oh, and your sentences should finish with a space after the full stop- Like this
Joe and Bob stalked to the illegal bar. On the way, a red-eyed cat mewled at them, cowering in the corner of an alleyway.
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