- That was a great chapter, and no ron doesn't deserve to be with luna. and beacause harry is acting very protective over her ron will know that he can't act like an ass to her or talk her into doing things for him, beacause using luna will make harry kill him. but harry and hermone will have to talk soon so that they can find out where the other is coming from. and yes the weasleys are using harry, why beacause i refuse to think that molly would just happen to show up at the same time as harry when they are known for arriving minutes before the train leaves. becides the fact that molly acts like she doesn't know where the platform is, after five of her children going there, also all the times she had to go there when she was a student.
Author's responseI agree with you on the Weasley subject, I will not bash Gred or Forge though, sorry love the twins. As for the chat between Harry and Hermione it wont happen until chapter 9 or 10, I have things that I need to be done before H/Hr time. Dont worry though, they will get together.
- bash the weasley females and he who does not have brain(aka ron) all u want cos thats what they are good for....i agree with the facts stated by lycus about molly asking for the platform after herself going to hogwarts unless they were incrementing platform numbers by one quarter every year or something like that....great read so far and hope u'll update soon so i can read some more weasley and dumbles bashing even...wonder how the dursleys and snape will fair with this new improved version of harry....update soon please
- Another great chapter mate, I can't wait to see what happens next.
I like how people reacted to Harry's story. I like how Harry looked after Hermione and Luna. I also like how he reacted to Ron and Ginny.
I can't wait for the next update. keep up the great work.
- A bit jumpy on the writing and though the plotline is good the way your writing things the characters are bit two-dimensional and I think you really need more narration.
Also with all the power why not have Harry with "two" Girlfriends/wives'!
P.S. Sirius can adopt him with a blood ritual and then he'd be the next Hair of the Blacks after Sirius!
- Good chapter, though it needs a bit of polish in places (some spelling errors and such as well as the writing clean-up that dennisud mentioned). Still, 'twas most intriguing and it'll be interesting to watch matters develop. I rather expect that Ron & Ginny are not going to enjoy the coming week.
- Really like the story so far. I'm intrested to see what all you do with it. With the way you have Harry acting towards Luna I agree that a H/Hr/L isn't impossible with the setup you have created.
I also agree I think JK wrote a very odd interpretation of some of the Weasleys. I don't know if it was her intent but I was always learry of Molly, Ginny, and Ron like they were using Harry while the twins and Arther I always felt were good chaps who had Harry's best interest at heart and not their own....
Regardless Keep up the good work and can't wait to read more.
- Glad Harry will be returning to something less godlike soon.
What about Neville? Going to do anything interesting with him? Like a scene where he shows Harry & Hermione a bunch of human-eating (in particular, Bella-eating) plants that he's been growing, or something like that? Basically, I'd like to see characters other than Harry showing initiative in the war efforts.
If you do choose to do H/Hr/L, it would be nicer if it was a three way relationship - i.e. included Hr/L - as opposed to being a 'guy with two wives' kind of thing.
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