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Family surprises
(#) allos 2008-07-07
Quite interesting, I'm not sure I've read one like it. Please Continue.Family surprises
(#) dougal74 2008-07-07
A really good start, I hope I don't have to wait to long for your next chapter.
Keep up the good work.Family surprises
(#) DragonMage101 2008-07-07
I liked this story.
It it very original.
I can't wait to find out what happens next.Family surprises
(#) xandrian 2008-07-07
I enjoy it so far. It's an interesting start. I'm curious to see where you take it.
Family surprises
(#) xxsapphireravenxx 2008-07-07
seems unfinished to me..more like the start of a story rather than a one shotFamily surprises
(#) dennisud 2008-07-07
Well you sure opened up a can if worms But a good sort.
I can't wait to see how the various families got together. I also have a similar story though starting right after DH (Yeah I'll forget the epilogue).
Good luck!
dennisudFamily surprises
(#) jump_jives 2008-07-07
This is a very nice little story, but I have to agree that this is begging to be a longer story. I must say that using a shortage of males (apparently from the war) as a reason for polygamy seems a more realistic reason for a Harry/many story than most.
While a Harry/many story might have people expecting a fair amount of smut, its not really necessary story. I think this has been set up in such a way that the really interesting part of the story is the 'through the looking glass' quality of Rebecca and Rose learning about a new world.
If necessary I would offer to help you by acting as a sounding board for ideas, or possibly even a beta depending upon your needs.
Having said all of that, I can't help but mention that I am looking forward to the next chapter of Motorcycle.
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