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• You’re My Phobia

  (#) lilrainforest 2008-07-11

  Omggg. James kinda sounds like a bitch...
  But I wonder how Frankie feels about his return and stuff... why is he resisting exactly... I mean I have a pretty good idea why but I don't know, you're the story teller. You tell us! (:
  Actually this was a pretty good chapter. I loved Elena's words when she said whether it be a boy or a girl. I thought that was really sweet.
  Poor Gerard. He knows he lovea Frank. He just knows it.
  Please update soon. You're writing is awesome.
  ~Rayy

• You’re My Phobia

  (#) RyanRossLuver 2008-07-11

  Wow... I kinda understand how you can say you hate it, but it was actually really good.
  
  thanks for the e-mail about it btw. And James sounds like a meanie. Don't ask whyy, just does.
  
  Cant wait for Gee and Frank to be togetha lol
  xox Emmi

• You’re My Phobia

  (#) Red-4Blue- 2008-07-12

  Yay, James sound like a perfectly hot dickhead that we can all hate nicely.
  
  QUESTION;
  are you still doing the lessons? or have they faded out?
  good writing but i understand why you didnt like it. not that i didnt, i can just see why you wouldn't.
  
  do you have an ending set out or are just writing as it comes?
  
  RED

• You’re My Phobia

  (#) Rosiel-chan 2008-07-12

  Actually, I didn't think that this was bad at all. I loved Elena's tale and the short sequence of Gerard singing at her funeral.
  
  And James is back! Omg! :D
  
  Uhm, there's one little thing that's jsut a little bit confusing at times: spelling. I mean, no offence, but if you could try.. :D I do that too in my fanfics and I'm always glad when someone tells me, so.. you know :D
  
  I can't wait for the next chapter!

• You’re My Phobia

  (#) EvolHexx 2008-07-12

  Firstly I’d like to say thank you for all being supportive. And the rules are still a part of it, not as much because that’ll slowly disappear as the fall for eachother.
  Also..
  I
  I’ll probably re-write this chapter when I can. & thanks for the spelling this lols, I get annoyed easily so I cbf editing LOL. Sorry!
  I’ll redo this chapter when I can be fucked, and get better (im sick, gahh :[ )
  

• You’re My Phobia

  (#) RippedIntoPieces 2008-07-12

  It was a good chapter, don't be so hard on yourself. The ending was great, I don't like James...he reminds me slightly of Edward from twilight. Edward/Jasper. Great job anyway, update soon as you can

• You’re My Phobia

  (#) harlequingirl-x 2008-07-12

  'tis not you best but still VERY good =]]
  
  i think the frerard should start soon because of the 14 chapters down the track?
  
  I love this story =]]]
  
  

• You’re My Phobia

  (#) ThnksbutiloveBobmore 2008-07-12

  Aww, Thats such a cute chapter.
  
  I like the flashback, alot!
  
  Why is James back, wanker.
  
  Great Chapter.
  
  Well written.
  
  Update Soon Please.
  
  
  Eloise.
  Xx

• You’re My Phobia

  (#) poetictragedy 2008-07-12

  hjghgfsudg. SO CUTE. (:
  i'm loving. update soon ay.
  can't wait for frank and gerard to get together.

• You’re My Phobia

  (#) frankiegrhey 2008-07-12

  i absolutely love it.
  the plot line is still RLY confusing.
  buttt i am starting to get it and such.
  snap; James is back. that hoe.
  
  Gerard walking away? Walking away from whattt?
  
  like i said; love it.
  you're an amazing writer

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