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• Waiting

  (#) XxCRYSTALLINExX 2008-08-05

  aaaah no I damn near cried when I read this I think I only have one criticism- there's not enough punctuation! Hang on a minute, you know where I live... Hides under bed

  Author's response

  thankyoooo
  
  i've been wating for a review for aaggggeeeeeeeeesssssssssss!!
  
  ur 2 are my first (hiphip horaaayyy!)
  
  mmm...aahh... i dnt mind ur critisism (it's constructive critisism!) so, i wont kill u this time (notice the this time in that sentence)!

• Waiting

  (#) AllieC 2008-08-27

  omg!! this is so good! it makes your heart sink at the end, b cuz u dont realise that he is dead until the very end1 xxxxxxxxx ;)

• Waiting

  (#) XxCRYSTALLINExX 2009-05-02

  awww, there's something so sad about this it makes your entire face crumple. I rated you 'moving' and added you to my favourites:)

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