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You Remind Me Of A Former Love.
(#) MrSz-Or3o 2008-07-24
NO! i dont want this story to end
but i love this chapter
it made me say 'aww'
lol
MuchLove
MrSz.Or3oAuthor's response
Awhe, thank you!
I'm so glad you liked it.
Thank you for the review. :]You Remind Me Of A Former Love.
(#) medicatedlives 2008-07-24
-flails-
BUT WHAT ABOUT RYAN AND HELEN!?!?!?!!? You're making me into a frustrated pile of goo. ACK. I don't understandddddd. WHY is she being so difficult?!
Stupid stupid stupid stupid Brendon for always fucking everything up. He ruined like, 3 relationships! Oh my gosh! How in the world did you make someone so amazingly adorable ruin that many relationships? My gosh. Genius.
And Elle. Poor poor Elle. And Nicole. Feisty.
So obviously, I enjoyed this chapter very very much. All of your updates are full of win, seriously. I love it. All of it.
-claps-
Author's response
LOL. :]
I love when you review. It makes me giggle and feel all fuzzy inside. :]
Helen and Ryan? You'll just have to wait and see. [Even if it does make you turn into a frustrated pile of goo]
Ah, yes. I hate Brendon as well. Mind you, it really does pain me to write him being an asshole. Mostly because I picture him as sweet and adorable. But, it's always good to bring something fresh and new. Not many people have a jerk Brendon. :]
You are too kind. Thank you for the review. :]You Remind Me Of A Former Love.
(#) webba141 2008-07-25
EXCUSE ME, BUT NO!!!!!!!!!
sniff the story can't end!...wailing
sniff poor helen.. sincerley hope there is a happy ending. =)
may i just say one of the most poetic lines i have EVER heard came from this chapter 'He wanted words to mend these broken hearts of theirs, but words could only do so much...(entire paragraph)'-that was an awesome piece of paragraph.
OMG, idea- lets hug elle and helen (especially helen), yell at nicole, punch brendon and shake my head at ryan, poor ryan.
yay, please update soonAuthor's response
Hahaha. Your reviews make me smile. :]
But, alas, a story must end somewhere. -shrugs-
ACK! I'm glad you liked that paragraph! That was one of my favorites as well. When I first wrote it, I thought it wasn't all that good, but then I realized that I loved it. :]
Thank you for the review!You Remind Me Of A Former Love.
(#) ficfriction 2008-07-25
I know I'll be sad to see the story go, even if I don't review often lol, but I can't wait to see how your creative mind ends it. I must admit though, I hate brendon's char in this story lol he's a butt who needs to be cheated on himself so he can see what it's like. Fucker.
I LOVED this chapter btw =) It rocked.Author's response
-blinks rapidly-
Is this...
No, it can't be!
A NEW REVIEWER?
gasp
NO WAII.
-hugs-
This review made me smile and dance. Gahhh. :]
No worries, though. Brendon's character is a butt. A lot of people hate him [including me] ;]
ACK! I'm glad you had a chance to review and that you've been reading. I really am. I'm also glad to hear you liked the chapter. :]
Thank you for the review! :]You Remind Me Of A Former Love.
(#) infinite-oddity 2008-07-25
My, my, I have quite the sailors mouth, don't I?
XD
This was like a roller coaster.
I mean, I was like, "No! Helen! Stop being stubborn." Then, "BRENDON. GO AWAY." And after that, I felt a surge of proud, because Ryan didn't have a mental breakdown. And then I laughed at Elle. And you ended it with a sufficient 'Awwwww!'
Webba! I agree with you. hugs self
It is sorta crazy how you write me. It is pure perfection. Elle is a perfect description of me. I read this fic and think, "You know what? Paige knows me better then I know myself." And then I get confused, because that is usually not what happens. But then, after a little while, I just feel love.
Thank you for this story, I am sad to see it go. D:
Love,
Elle.Author's response
Gahhh. I love you.
I'm not sure if I know you better than you know yourself, but I try. :]
You have made me a really happy person when I read this review. I'm serious. Once I saw my emails this morning say, 'New review on FicWad' I jumped up in joy and squealed.
Thank you for the review!You Remind Me Of A Former Love.
(#) xoconverse 2008-07-25
I loved this chapter! I was so happy for Ryan and how he finally was optimistic enough to try and talk to Helen. Poor Ryan :[ And STUPID Brendon! Man, this is the fist time I ever hated him in a story! Elle's right, he is the biggest prick ;]
and what? that's not the end is it? tell me theres more... im gunna cry now :[
Oh! but before I go cry, you did a great great great great great job! this is probably one of the best stories ive ever read on here! Thank you for writing it! :] (now ill go cry)Author's response
Ah, yes. Our little Ryan finally got the courage to speak to Helen. Too bad he was turned down. -tear-
And no, this isn't the end. There will be a few more chapters or so. So, do not cry! :]
One of the best stories, eh? You have no idea how happy that makes me. I love you. :]
Thank you for the review!You Remind Me Of A Former Love.
(#) iluvsmiliez 2008-07-25
Okay, I loved the whole 'Helen in dance clothes thing.'
It got intense, I love that! :]
Ryan and Elle are like best friends. They just don't know it! :]
I love it! Update soon! :]]Author's response
Ah yes. Helen is in fact, a ballet dancer. [Mostly because I am quite jealous of dancers. I wish I could dance.]
Thank you for the review!You Remind Me Of A Former Love.
(#) xStabxMyxBackx 2008-07-25
okay, when this story ends...i hope you think about a sequel! this is a great story hun...i love it!
xoxo
Niki FMAuthor's response
Sequel?
I have, in fact thought of doing one. Another source mentioned I should write a sequel, but I would have no idea what I'd do. Plus, I'm notorious for never doing a sequel. [The last multi-chaptered story I wrote, I told readers that I had a sequel in mind, but I never got around to writing it. Oops.]
Though, I'm sure everyone will be content with the ending for this story coming up, that they won't need another one.
-shrugs-
But, I am certainly glad you enjoyed this story enough to want more. :]
Thank you for the review. :]You Remind Me Of A Former Love.
(#) eileen162 2008-07-25
I really really really dont want tthis story to end, i love it far too much for that.
this chapter was good, it closed off some doors (aka brendon)
yeah this chapter was way intense. but i like intense!!
update soon please (and thankyou)
xxxAuthor's response
Awhe. All stories have to end sometime, though. :]
Alas, I'm torn. Half of me can't wait until I end this story, the other half doesn't want it too. Believe me, I love writing this so much. And the feedback I get fuels me to write more. I'm serious. I am so very grateful to my readers and reviewers. You guys mean so much to me. :]
Thank you for the review. :]You Remind Me Of A Former Love.
(#) rclukins 2008-07-27
so, returning to the scene of the crim eh evil version of Brendon!
No! Leave! Nobody wants you hear!!
I just noticed that Elle acts a lot like me. lol.
Author's response
Ahaha.
One of my friends acts a lot like Elle, too. XD
Thank you for the review. ^_^
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